Thursday, February 2, 2012

Is it possible to drink a gallon of milk in an hour?

This is from my up and coming novel called, "How to Drink a Gallon of Milk." I am a young author who aspires to become a well known and accomplished author some day.





Title of current novel I am writing: How to Drink A Gallon of Milk





Short Description: Five friends decide to take revenge on the school bullies.





Long Description: It is the beginning of school, in the first period Chemistry, a boy named James who is very discriminative against lesbians, homosexuals, ridicules Jamie, who is gay, in front of the entire class. They end up getting in a big fight and Jamie gets suspended for startng the fight while James remains at school. During second period Geometry, Brittney makes fun of Ke'Yante because of his ashy legs. She ridicules him in front of the entire class and her friend Crista tries to stop her but she does not listen. During third period spanish class Jason meets a new friend named Felipe who speaks no spanish. Not wanting him to feel left out in the ice breaker, he kindly speaks with him. Felipe is quiet at first and when Jessica, his sister comes over to tell Jason that he speaks no spanish. Jason decides to learn the llanguage. They end up falling love and dating.On the basketball courts, Jason, the main character, meets two boys named James and Roberto. He also meets a new friend named Lee. He takes a break to go get a drink of water and comes back to find Lee being beaten up by Robetto and James. He intervenes and all four of them end up geting suspended. While suspended Jason and Jamie end up meeting in a store. And with Lee's help, they devise a plan to get revenge, also with the help of James newly found girlfriend, and friend Felipe, he manages to get some habanera peppers and they also spike two bottles with laxatives. Ironically, Jessica is handing out the gatorade bottles at next week''s basketball tryouts and they have a little suprise for Jason and Roberto. Crista who coincidentally was secretly dating Roberto discovers Roberto and her friend Brittney kissing in the back of the stage after Drama class. Infuriated, she later finds out from the rest of the school what Jason, Jamie, Lee did to Roberto and James at basketball tryouts and she offers to help them plot to seek revenge on Brittney. James, Lee, Jamie, Jason, and Crista all meet up after school and discuss their plans for Brittney. Overhearing their conversation, Ke'yante says he wants in too. They welcome him to contribute in any way that he can. Crista suggests that they give her weight gainer bars. Britteny was always talking about losing a few pounds for the up and comnig spring fling.





A story about love, friendship, revenge, and humor. Very enjoyable. I hope to get it published someday. What do you think?





The story ends at an after party with me attempting to drink a gallon of milk in less than an hour. I am seated all around the table and people are cheering me on in high hopes that I may actually be able to do it.








|||Ewe - why the hell would someone want to do that? Are you deficient in calcium or something?|||That was really good actually, I like how it flowed together. I think it should have people actually talking though. You got it in you man, you're going to be a great author.|||Um first off, Milk isn't Beer, Wine, or a Spirit...but to answer your question no it isn't. But since its a fun story just say they muscled through it or something.|||When I was haulin' hay in the late 60's I could drink a gallon of milk strait out of the bulk tank in 5 minutes. So it can be done.|||It can be possible, but you will throw up!!! If not during, definitely after.|||Why is this under foods?????|||Interesting book but it seems it'd be better discussed under "Issues and Tolerance" or if there's a section more frequented by teenagers ..


My question is, why is it assumed the latino kid doesn't speak


english as opposed to mentioning how the anglo kid doesn't speak spanish, and how as they learn eachother's language, they BOTH benefit

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